Some people suggest higher education should be funded by the government, while others think students should pay the course fees themselves.
Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Whether the government or the students themselves should pay for the higher education fees has become a discussion topic nowadays. While people may debate in the different views, I have my own opinion about this issue.
Some people who suggest government should fund the high level education believe it can bring more merits in long run. More talents could be cultivated for society since most of the well educated people have fabulous productive and are more competitive in work, who would reward the society after receiving advanced studies. On the other hand, there are a lot of poorer students, who are eager for knowledge, need the financial support from government, which not only show the equality, but also may dig out the outstanding talent who has just been limited by money. For example, Prof. Youyou Tu, who won the Nobel Prize in 2016 said, if she were not supported by the government, she would have no chance to know science stuff.
Others may argue individual's growth should not be paid by authorities since it is a waste of money in two ways. Firstly, there are many other important issues such as environmental protection and pollution processing, which are urgent but could be handled if the government saved the education supports. Secondly, a potential risk is that the funded people may go abroad, contributing to other countries by consuming the fees from motherland's taxers.
In my opinion, I suggest a compromise strategy that government fund a certain proportion of students' higher education after evaluating the qualifications and financial states, aiming to support who either have high intelligence and developing potentials or are willing to study but their parents cannot afford the fees.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16014234875 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75292149647 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622775800712 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.3204130938 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.818181818 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27584200657 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1000147567 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761070299482 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170173818991 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602263066719 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.