Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes, Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
With the advancements of technologies and innovations, the world has overwhelmingly changed and will be changing. While some people opine that we should adapt ourselves with the new world, others believe that doing things with the same old routine in an endless loop is a best way to live life. This essay will discuss that why adaptation with new world is superior than staying on the same spot.
To begin with, living the life by repeating same routine jobs for eternity is preferable by some people. This is because, for them it is easy to do the same things every day and not learning new things that will take time and effort. For instance, for old people reading news on newspapers is easy for them than reading it on internet where there is lots of content and more convenient. In addition, changing routine job and starting new things is risky and in order to avoid the risk, the people usually stuck on repeating things in an infinite loop because these pupils feel wary about taking risks. To exemplify, most companies are still following the same old methodologies for centuries and not advancing with time because they feel reluctant in using new technologies and methodologies because of the risk involved. As a result, they are obliged to do things in a same old ways instead of getting ahead with time.
However, adapting with time and living your life with in parallel with the advancements is indispensable. If someone do not evolve with time, he/she is more likely to fall behind in the long run that can adversely affect him/her career, life and economic condition. Nokia Company CEO, for example, cried in an interview (when his company has been bankrupt) and complaint about one thing that his company did not evolve with time like other companies such as Samsung and Apple etc. Moreover, competition in the market for mediocre jobs is increasing these days because of new tools and technologies and only those can secure a good job if he/she has a good command on new methodologies. It is for these reasons, changes in life is considered to be the significant ingredient for getting successful and getting ahead in the race.
In conclusion, evolving with the ever changing world is either necessary or not is a controversial issue. This essay discussed that why some people are holding a flawed understanding of not progressing with time. In my opinion, changes in life is necessary otherwise we will be left behind in every area and field.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... same old routine in an endless loop is a best way to live life. This essay will ...
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Line 1, column 367, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...y adaptation with new world is superior than staying on the same spot. To begin w...
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Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are lots'?
Suggestion: there are lots
... them than reading it on internet where there is lots of content and more convenient. In addi...
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Line 3, column 880, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
... are obliged to do things in a same old ways instead of getting ahead with time. ...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...vancements is indispensable. If someone do not evolve with time, he/she is more li...
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Line 5, column 606, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
... of new tools and technologies and only those can secure a good job if he/she has a good ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2050.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 422.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85781990521 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68355695938 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495260663507 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 647.1 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4245014849 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.588235294 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8235294118 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219730624963 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799350184868 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498533703439 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144504430298 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348397046032 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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