Some people say that art (e.g. painting, music, poetry) can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can be only made by those with special abilities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
These days, there is a great concern about the issues related to art. When these problems come into view, there exist many conflicting opinions. Some people share the view that art can be made by everyone. Meanwhile, others are of the view that only people with special abilities can make art products. Both of the views have their own merits which require careful consideration.
On the one hand, some people argue that art can be only made by people who possess gifted abilities. One explanation to support this view is that in reality, almost outstanding performances all over the world were performed by people with talented capacities. For example, Michael Jackson, who was an extraordinary and gifted artist, left a legacy of music, style and the ability to connect with others through the power of rhythm and dance. Therefore, only could the performances which had been made by geniuses influence ordinary people.
On the other hand, some people advocate that art can be made by everybody. To explain, making art is considered as a right of a human to relieve stress. In fact, there are many laws issued by the Vietnamese government to protect this right to help people maintain their well-being by expressing their feelings. As a result, art is able to be made by normal people not only by people with specialized skills.
Given the aforementioned points, it may be concluded that both people with endowed abilities and usual people can make art if they want.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96370967742 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63113103936 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572580645161 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1706626692 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9285714286 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.451942729244 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176751836346 0.084324248473 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146467351257 0.0667982634062 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293484638604 0.151304729494 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451653346313 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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