Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss these both views and give your own opinion.
There is no doubt that public health has to be enhanced by using some effective measures. Although some people believe that increasing the number of sports facilities would be a best way, I would argue that other measures are needed to assure wellbeing of citizens.
On the one hand, those who think adding sports equipment could be influential might argue that doing exercise is always good for health. This is because not everyone wants to use those facilities and do not have any time to do workout. For example, there are a lot of neglected tools, not utilized often, in front of my apartment. In contrast, if the government spend money on other approaches instead of sports apparatus, the level of healthiness will may get better.
On the other hand, my view is that other methods are wanted because of what I mentioned above. The reason for this by applying other measures the number of people going to hospital can noticeably reduce. For instance, if the government organizes a vaccination against cold in the winter, there will be fewer people who take cold. Furthermore, the state-hospitals should perform a free check-in once in a month because in recent years people are tend to not pay attention to their healthcare. As a result, people will know earlier how bad or good their health situation.
In conclusion, despite the importance of exercise which good for health, I suggest that in order to guarantee public health such measures as a vaccination and a free medical examination are required.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...he number of sports facilities would be a best way, I would argue that other meas...
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Line 2, column 290, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'utilized'.
Suggestion: often utilized
...there are a lot of neglected tools, not utilized often, in front of my apartment. In contrast,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93333333333 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72572999368 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580392156863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5979469673 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.833333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267064032926 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907239532331 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740032166091 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171839562405 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898583585795 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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