Some people say that every human being can create art, for example painting. Others think only the people born with the ability can create art
discuss both view and give your opinion?
Some people argue that all individuals are able to generate art such as painting, while others claim that natural talented ones are the only fortunates to produce it. This essay will discuss both statements and provide a reasoned opinion on how individuals with natural abilities outperform any not talented person in terms of art.
There is no doubt that practice is paramount for anyone to become expertise in any field including art. That is to say that the repetition of the same thing on a daily basis allows to people improve their skills and results. Therefore, practicing art with enthusiasm can result in a nice piece of art. Nevertheless, in my opinion, determination and practice is not enough to succeed, due to the fact that becoming a real artist implicates having an open mind, and unfortunately this is an acquired skill. To illustrate this, there are a plethora of street artist that struggle to make a living since they cannot generate a great painting. This results in a lot of frustrated artist.
Turning on the other side of the argument, natural talented people have creative minds. They can make fabulous paintings without much effort or determination. Hence, creating a georgous pieces of art is an straighforward thing without much practice. This kind of person clearly outperform a normal person even if it this one has practiced every single day. A prime example of success in a person with an adquired ability is Picasso, who painted the world known mona lisa picture in only 10 days and with scarse of colours available.
To conclude, although enthusiasm and practice is the key for anyone to become more experienced and improve the art skills, people with natural abilities is more likely to be accomplished as an artist.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'peopling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: peopling
... the same thing on a daily basis allows to people improve their skills and results. There...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: The proper name in singular (lisa) must be used with a third-person verb: 'pictures'.
Suggestion: pictures
..., who painted the world known mona lisa picture in only 10 days and with scarse of colo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, while, kind of, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97619047619 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77392787028 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585034013605 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5452135138 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295045137392 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911680883013 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623861032645 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173541539171 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293905029699 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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