Some people say government should give the health care the first priority, some other believe there are more important priorities to spend the tax payers’ money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People hold the different views whether the national authorities should allocate the state budget on healthcare service or other priorities to comfort the citizens’ lives. Both sides of the argument will be discussed in this essay.
It is undeniable that providing free medical services from the government is a must as its necessity to reduce the burden for the country’s residents. Coping with the fast-paced life, many people suffer from some certain diseases caused from the workplace and lifestyle. This leads to a great amount of money spent on medicine and medical treatment. For instance, an increasing number of patients need the medical care to treat the stress from work in the UK, therefore, National Health Care Service has been established to provide them free-of-charge healthcare.
There are, in fact, other social issues needed to take into account, and schooling is one of them. If the state could provide a free access to education, the people would have a better chance to facilitate their future with a good career prospect and the country itself could minimize the illiteracy. Many researchers have proven that the country, which has a well-trained labor force, has had the high standard of living, and therefore, been prosperous. Take Vietnam is as an example for this, although studying is not free but affordable, many Vietnamese graduates now can join in a multinational companies to earn their livings with higher wages. It is not exaggerate to say Vietnam has become a good nation to live and work both locals and expats recent years.
To sum up, receiving healthcare support from the government is the ultimate priority as the benefits it brings, but in my point of view, the country should balance its budget between medical care and education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'free access'.
Suggestion: free access
...one of them. If the state could provide a free access to education, the people would have a b...
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Line 5, column 661, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'exaggerated'.
Suggestion: exaggerated
...ir livings with higher wages. It is not exaggerate to say Vietnam has become a good nation...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17182130584 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79760967666 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604810996564 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9632220331 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.416666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148052575687 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507543651754 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394059361287 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975207873422 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438404599268 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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