Some people say it is better to accept a bad situation while some think it is better to improve it. Discuss both of the views and give your own opinion.
trying to make the right decision in the uncertain world is a constant activity of human beings. when things go wrong , some people choose to go with the flow while others are determined to solve the problemes they are facing. From my point of view, i believe taking actions to improve adverse situations should be encouraged in modern society.
Admittedly, it is not hard to imagine why some people are not willing to make a big change when they are in trouble: it is human nature to stay in the safe zone. when a working environment is unfavorable, including a bossy supervisor or a exhausting project, many people opt to bear them simply because they are afraid of losing their jobs. Another example is residents often complain about their living conditions, such as vandalism in the community or dirty hallways. but when some
people try to organize a volunteer group to monitor such misconducts, many refuse to squeeze some time to participate because they have gotten used to their life pace.
However, an important thing many people fail to recognize is that some small actions can make a big change. imagine a worker who always take all the blames from work without defending himself, it is possible that he has to tolerate more unjustified accusations. but if one day he decides to fight back for his rights, others may begin to reflect on their own problems and treat him with respect. Similarly, if everyone tries to contribute a little to a better environment including using
recyclable plastic bags or sorting wastes, we can have an better environment and many animal lives can be saved from being trapped by artificial products.
To sum up, many people ignore their potential role that can be played in improving an undesirable situation. I believe that to the majority of cases, no matter it is as urgent as a fire in the house or it is a more long-time condition such as the shortage of money, actively trying to addressing rather than avoiding them is a better choice.
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... to a better environment including using recyclable plastic bags or sorting waste...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, similarly, so, while, as to, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83965014577 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65696402216 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600583090379 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.531314408 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.692307692 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3846153846 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169350756821 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543526352699 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400889275065 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821627723506 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253068032857 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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