Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some individual believe that the most serious environmental problem is the loss of particular creatures in our time. Others oppose that there are more vital environmental issues. In my aspect, there are some others which play a vital role in our lives. This essay discusses both sides of this issue and clarifies my perspective as well.
Nowadays, our human society become more likely to concern about the environmental problems. The extinction of some particular species is one of those. In the ecosystem, the loss of a small part of it could impact the whole food cycle. For instance, a specie of small deer which was only founded in South East Asia became extinct. Not very long after that extinction, there was a research published on a journal showed the information about the decline in number of the predator tigers. Additionally, there were many more articles about the animal and plant species that became extinct being published around the world. Therefore, people individually believe that this is the main environmental problem of our time.
Even though many papers on this topic have been published, there are the other problems which scientists also take in account. Human society has been developed throughout the years. During the development, we have produced so many wastes which harm the nature. The man-made gadgets, such as mobile phone, or electronic device, are invented and made from natural resource. There is no oppose to say that human being lives their life by destroying the ecology. The UNESCO pointed out the Global Warming and Green House Effect a few years ago. These have been playing a vital action in the changing of world temperature which is known as Climate Change. Human being lifestyle affects this a lot. To illustrate, the use of air conditioner gives out CFC which is a green house gas causing the whole in ozone layer. This problem is more important that the loss of some creatures in the world because this will have a long-term effect on every life.
From both views mentioned above, I strongly suppose that there are more important environmental problems, rather than the loss of particular species. It can be seen apparently in the ways people recently live. The global warming is now a big warning sign from this planet. It should be taken in account by the government of all nations and each individual populace as well.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00502512563 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59981298362 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552763819095 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9109077094 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.68 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.92 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.56 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301145262804 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740910536534 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866667714707 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180368839584 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701817687607 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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