Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Without a doubt, music is a powerful tool to express ideas and help understanding other individual's mindset. There are some reasons to believe that music can unify various cultures and people from different age groups. However, this may not apply to all situations. For instance, there might exist some individuals who are representing a radical agenda or having different political views.
There are some cases which can help people from different age or culture to come along. People from all around the world can understand music easily because it is a universal language. Consequently, we can see that many countries are using their folk music to introduce their culture. Another example is classical music. As years have been passed, classical music has not been altered too much. In result, people from different age group can relate to this category of music.
On the other hand, sometimes different age group or culture may not understand each other because of their differences in taste or how they think. Many young people are interested in kinds of music which are irritating to the older audience. Conversely, the music that older people are listening to might be dull for teenagers. Plus, we have a different point of views from different countries. For example, some people may listen to kinds of music, which have a specific message that other group may not approve.
In summary, music can have a positive impact on relationships between various cultures and age groups. There is no need to know other languages when we can use music to depict our ideas and culture. Moreover, there exist some categories which have not changed in recent years; thus, we can take this opportunity to connect with people of all ages. Nevertheless, there are some circumstances that we can not rely on music for this situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to understand' or 'understand'.
Suggestion: to understand; understand
...powerful tool to express ideas and help understanding other individuals mindset. There are so...
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Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ress ideas and help understanding other individuals mindset. There are some reasons to beli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, for instance, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08250825083 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62821093702 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498349834983 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9835725455 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.0526315789 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9473684211 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05263157895 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266593557587 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100713554687 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665697740302 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18840556129 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196516643467 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.