Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree and disagree with this statement.
It is often argued that people in multiple culture and ages may come under one umbrella through music. In my opinion, people with various cultures and ages assemble with the power of music, which has no boundaries. This essay will first assert how music becomes a powerful way to introduce different nation and period together.
Firstly, People of distinctive nations may come all together by music for charity. Sometimes, renowned bands visit one country to another for collecting money and give them to the war-devastated country. Here people just feel the music without lyrics and being united by attending the concert when language and culture have no barrier. For instance, an American musician collected the donation for the liberation war of Bangladesh in 1971. In this way, music becomes a powerful tool beyond culture.
Secondly, it also would be a medium of togetherness of different ages of people when it comes to the country song or the national anthem. It is the ritual of any country that all ages of people show honor to their national anthem. For example, in Bangladesh when people hear the national anthem, they just stand up and show their dignity to this song. Hence, music, which has no cultural barrier, able to bring people of different ages together.
In conclusion, music, which has the vast power of bringing people together of all nation-state and all ages. Sometimes through music people raise money for another nation while sometimes it bringing up people with all ages in one shade.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04761904762 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51186401331 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531746031746 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.2550069396 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.8571428571 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313834850315 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131506615569 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805107009399 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219334141625 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641828585994 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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