Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Today, there are many styles of music types in the world. Many online websites or streaming applications present many types of music. Some people believe, it is possible that people from different cultures and different ages join with together by music.
Normally, each country has own traditional music which usually arises from the culture of that country. Sometimes countries have also traditional music instruments. Listening to other countries' songs and familiarity with their music instruments can help us to know more about other cultures. For instance, the guitar is a musical instrument which usually is used in Spain. Although many people do not understand Spanish, they like Spanish music since they like the guitar's song.
However, some people think elderly people like just relaxing music or old music styles such as country style, but it is not a correct judgment. Likewise, adults always do not listen to rock music or metal music. Today's many different concerts and music festivals are performed around the world, we can see, people with different ages and different opinions take part in these events and enjoy from it together.
In my opinion, listening to music is not only a hobby or a relaxing method but also is a good approach to meet people from different cultures and different ages. It can help that all people be happy with together.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'guitars'' or 'guitar's'?
Suggestion: guitars'; guitar's
... like Spanish music since they like the guitars song. However, some people think eld...
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...en to rock music or metal music. Todays many different concerts and music festivals are perfor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, so, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13392857143 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4974317165 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0145152328 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4615384615 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337751664263 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128340640017 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100724664624 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240863894024 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737491009703 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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