In this present scenario, it has become trend to learn a foreign language. Whereas, some people assert that work or travel are only motives to learn an alien language, while other believe there are other reasons also. Here, I shall scrutinise both sides of this assertion.
Admittedly, primary purpose to learn other language is traveling, as person can communicate with locals and get more information about their culture, different traditions and festivals. They can explore more places, do new experiments and gain experiences by interacting with common people of that nation. Secondly, better job opportunity is also a reason why majority of people learn foreign language. As, in the era of globalization numerous multinational companies are working across the globe. Individuals want to elevate their chance of promotion and secure their jobs which force them to learn foreign languages. Hence, people want to have better career and experience of visit to other country, for which learning alien language become obligatory.
On the other hand, there are several other reasons like most of learning material on internet is avaliable in international language. And, if anyone want to get some additional knowledge about any particular nation, recent scientific research or new invention, that language should be known. Furthermore, it helps people to broaden their horizons when they come to know about culture of that place and about nature of people through writings of local writers. This eventually results in more friendly world with less discrimination on basis of language. Thus, not only work and travel are reasons but also there are other motives.
In conclusion, in this contemporary world being bilingual is a fashion which every one wants to follow. Moreover, there are not any specific reasons to learn a language, it depends on situation and people's choice.
- Research are essential for developing new medicines and treatment to get better health and less disease Who individual private companies or government should fund these researches 54
- Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- Some people believe that sport has an important role in society Others however feel that it is nothing more than a leisure activity for some people 78
- Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. what are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects? 78
- The unlimited use of cars may cause many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce the problems, should we discourage people to use cars?. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...e other believe there are other reasons also. Here, I shall scrutinise both sides of...
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Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ority of people learn foreign language. As, in the era of globalization numerous m...
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Line 3, column 722, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to alien'
Suggestion: to alien
...it to other country, for which learning alien language become obligatory. On the ...
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Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecome obligatory. On the other hand, there are several other reasons like mos...
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
... international language. And, if anyone want to get some additional knowledge about ...
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...r nation, recent scientific research or new invention, that language should be known. Further...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ps people to broaden their horizons when they come to know about culture of that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36824324324 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76391616375 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597972972973 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7944297805 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337113626996 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112581597875 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932715802302 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208004513162 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752490711597 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.