Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say these are not the only reasons why some should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, the importance of knowing foreign languages has been increased among the people. Some people think, working in or travelling to abroad, is the sole reason for learning other language, nevertheless, others including me, suppose beside from this reasons, there are other motivations to learn other languages.
It is clear that people will be able to find newer and better job vacation and also will have a more comfortable abroad trips if they know some appropriate language. Factually, with understanding the language of other countries, people could make communication with people of these countries and overcome their needs comfortably. Indeed, there are not any convincible reasons to enforce people to know other language. In other words, just communication necessitates people to learn foreign language, unless hardly need they to speak in other languages, why, apart from travelling to or working in other countries, people won’t experience other situation to be having to speak in other countries.
On the other hand, I believe, some other reasons could consider as sufficient stimuli to know other languages. First of the all, it is not deniable that people could have a better accessibility to scientific sources if they know more languages, take as an illustration we will be able to read more articles if we know more than one language. In addition people who know a specific second language have more job vacations in their own countries, why beside themselves professional major, they would be able to work as a tour guide, interpreter, embassy clerk and many other relative field.
In conclusion, I could infer not only because of travel to other countries or seeking for job vacations there, but also for improving our knowledge and even better job position in our country, we need to learn more than one languages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one language', 'a language', or simply 'languages'?
Suggestion: one language; a language; languages
...our country, we need to learn more than one languages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23569023569 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86266974583 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52861952862 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5293920008 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.5 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273636597967 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122860583384 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06664251536 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190499080769 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832657854899 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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