Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree about this opinion?
As the development of society, people nowdays are raising the awareness of conserving wild animals and birds. thus a millions of dollar and other resources are poured in preseving wildlife. However some individual argue that this special focus is unecessary. Personally, I competely disagree with this opinion.
To begin with, there are two main reasons why people should pay much attention in protecting of wild animals. Firstly, the variety of animals and birds is one of the most precious gift of the God that humanity nowdays have to maintain. But today, there are many animals and bird species is getting endangered. It would no long when the world will lose most of its wildlife animals. Moreover, this situation may lead to several fatal impacts on human society. Secondly, the exist of wild animals play a vital role in managing the healthy eco-system and the balance of food chains. For instance, bee is vital for of certains crops due to their pollen carrying roles. If the bee is reduced number, the growth of crops would definitely lower owing to lack of pollination.
As aforementioned reasons, many countries has resorted to address this issue. many resources is drawn and a lot of money is spent for the sake of precerving wild specices. All huge amount of money is spent on advertisement campains, opening seminars about reserving wild animalss , establishing nature reservation and so on. It would be never enough money that we should spend on to protecting wild animals as our responsibilty.
In conclusion, As the result of the proaching and hunting issue, we have to be more stringent and investing more in order to conserve wild animals and birds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01798561151 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75119433779 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611510791367 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5455988039 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.0588235294 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3529411765 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256538765983 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717214312975 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514526229145 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142845034263 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521154922588 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.