Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to.How true is this statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments?
The increased amount of travelling by people in different countries to feel relaxed, have some negative impacts over nature and environment. Some people argued that the tourism affect the liveliness of nature, culture and habitants. I support with this statement because the harmful substances used by public and change the environmental situations for growing tourism can make a huge destructions in any country.
The tourist attractions have been very popular and many of the people go to the places for clicking pictures and photos. they go to the beaches and lakes for enjoying hip h of rides, also for doing some adventures like Scooba, diving, fishing etc. But this is very harmful for the aquatic creatures and for the aquatic environment because of the chemicals and gases mixed under the water could be found dangerous for sea animals. Sometimes it may affect over the living of animals and plants, resulting unwanted deaths. The form of providing unique form of foods also affect the marine life, animals are often used to make these types of food. The environmental issues evolved through producing farm and hotels for tourists by cutting trees and forests in countryside areas have immense effect over animals and vegetation. The lack of water availability and foods make animals vicious and they escape from the jungles to come into the cities.
For decreasing the effects of tourism on local cultures and environments, the tourist need to follow rules and regulations of the specific countries and make sure they are not hurting anyone's cultural values. they respect the traditions and beliefs of the people and join them in their events which keep up the unity and diversity. The travellers requires to not to make pollution and throw garbage anywhere, it is punishable to pay some penalty if you do. However, the people acknowledge the food of natural ingredients and do not harm any animal by their actions and activities while participating in the adventures. furthermore, necessarily those who are not aware about the dangers and safety of jungles, do not visit there before taking any guidance.
In conclusion, I support that people have to become responsible tourist before exploring the world and offer a good amount of support to protect the environment and culture of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13793103448 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70462614202 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564986737401 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3563585818 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0625 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5625 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281718185587 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844576263831 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675037720192 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176957704667 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805782176695 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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