To some people studying the past has little value in the modern world. Why do you think it is important to learn the past? What will be the effect if children are not taught history?
Many people believe that learning history might not have any importance in modern society. While others have an opposite view on this, the past is one of a part of the present because it contributes to the solid foundation of the present and gives right direction for the future. In my point of view, studying history is practical because it helps the young generation understand more about the ancestral struggle so that they respect the historical values and actively strive to build the country.
Building the future from the background shows the first importance of understanding history. Thanks to the knowledge of history, precious lessons of ancestors are valuable experiences for our descendants. For example, after the Resistance War against America, the combination of national strength and the right way to fight for victory was a worthwhile lesson learned from the war. Moreover, learning the history and traditional culture of the nation will be introduced to the youth, which is the first step to build the country. For instance, if the students do not know the history of the country, they will become illogical politicians who do not recognize the essential demand and proper policy-making for the future of the country.
Identifying national identity is the second most important aspect of comprehending history. Through the lessons of history, familiarity with the cultures and traditions of the nation is clearly illustrated, thereby helping the next generation more proud of the historical country and recommend that pride to the pulse of the people around. For example, if a Vietnamese international student knows about his country's history, he can introduce to his friends about the traditional specificity such as patriotism, solidarity,…
In conclusion, for those reasons, history is the book of the future that helps students become more aware of the mission and the responsibility of constructing the country. Moreover, understanding of history that preserves the values of national identity for future generations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 522, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.421875 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00481222115 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5375 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.1689765117 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.583333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142835729186 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586272603229 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501820956127 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838786030255 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470001709149 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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