Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help local community.
The believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole.
Do you agree or disagree?
It has been widely assumed that all students should be forced to do volunteer work in their spare time to support local inhabitants. Also, many believe that this would be advantageous for both sides. From my perspective, I partially agree with this idea.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why unpaid jobs are proven to bring enormous benefits for both teenagers and local community as a whole. One reason is that a wide range of hand-on experience might be acquired through this kind of job. For instance, volunteering at Hanoi Youth club, a voluntary organization which offers free tour for foreign tourists, can enable them students to enhance their English proficiency. Moreover, unpaid work would be economical for local community when as governments do not need to pay for the volunteers and authorities, thus, could spend thereby allocate budget to strengthen promote the welfare of local society.
On the one hand, it is my belief that obligatory unpaid-jobs could somehow / to some extent have detrimental impacts on the development of adolescents, as well as the freedom of society. Firstly, it is evident that the pressure of study pressure influence accounts for a great deal of how students spend their free time. They are usually required to attend at lecture or complete a huge workload of assignments. Consequently, they would be prone to high levels of stress and depression, if they were forced to do unpaid job. Secondly, it also definitely goes against the ideal of constitution, as well as human rights when a group of people is required to work without payments / do unpaid jobs, especially it might go again their will.
It goes without saying that, although volunteer work may offer a vast variety of benefit for youngsters and community, I completely contradict the idea of making it compulsory.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...adict the idea of making it compulsory.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for instance, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06953642384 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84175306967 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615894039735 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8548307735 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.769230769 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309785987749 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999144176049 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061164756372 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1757068355 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795836260684 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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