Some people think that all university students should whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future,such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While people hold that when people start to study, they should follow their favor major in university, should choose their future subject based on society’s needs. This essay will examine both side of view before arriving at conclusion.
According to one side of debate, The students are believed to should follow their interest subject in the university. When people have right to choose their tendency based on their talent, they can dedicate a great deal of effort and time to fulfill their dreams.Not only are talent and tendency significant factors for achievement but also they are stimulating elements to insisting on their goals for getting best result. A good illustration for this view is that when a football player have straggled for 20 years, particularly he can achieve to best position under no circumstance can not be forgotten the exact tendency in sever situation.
Despite the above argument, some people are say the needs of the society should be met by the students and it is the first priority. Although, some people have tended to particular subject, for boosting the societies science and Facilitating people life’s, it is necessary to studied technical and practical science like math, medical and computer. Another reason for mentioned view is that, this group of people have thought except science and technology, dedicating time and money for other subject is wasting resources.
In conclusion, I extremely believe, if the people have not the chance to follow their dreams, they will not enjoy their life. Consequently, it is obvious that job is the most important part of every human life and should be chosen based on person’s interest rather than societies needs.
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...s interest rather than societies needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22826086957 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72373896294 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572463768116 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.7818445094 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.3 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251215636033 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108659939315 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417827364887 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16138811719 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476000224775 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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