Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, the vast majority of the students prefer to study the subject which gives tremendous enthusiasm to themselves. However, due to today’s demand in growing technological world, part of young generation are recommended to study subjects as science and technology which meet requirement of modern world and those subjects will have benefits in their foreseeable work career. By analyzing both views, in this essay, we might be able to see differences which will lead to be able to draw conclusion on this discussion.
Studying subjects that fit your interest might be beneficial because learning materials and working on the field which excites you can have large impact on your knowledge and even in work career. People who has experience on subjects that do not give enthusiasm to themselves, have struggled in professional life due to lack of interest toward their jobs and studies. Studying in right subjects is advantageous for students in university and professional life.
On the other hand, if we look at sophisticated technological model of modern world, studying in subjects that have essential relationships to technology and science have more positive sides than studying in subjects which gives you enthusiasm. Perspective career and jobs that is offered in technological sectors is going to hold main areas of future business market. So preferring to study in these fields might have tremendous influence in the future of the young students.
To sum up, studying in subjects for students that they like might be valuable for them in terms of learning for enthusiasm, but studying in subjects that meets requirement of modern world and those will present luxurious life are mostly recommended for students. In my opinion, everyone has to be ambitious on their future, career and should choose subjects that give opportunity to work in jobs which will meet their life requirements.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, thus, as to, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3201320132 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9541401425 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508250825083 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2710540757 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.545454545 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249843881999 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997413981957 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506290402667 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160195362375 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465242482456 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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