Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some people maintain that all university students should study subjects which they have a passionate about. Other reject this notion believe that they should only be allowed to learn subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. This essay will going to elaborate on the argument for both views and present my opinions.
First of all, many people think that students should study only useful subjects, like medicine, engineering or information technology, etc … because they are more benefiical than art degree or music degree. The second advantage is this course provide more job opportunities, career progression and better salaries, so they can help students to improve their live quality easier. The last one, for government, if we force students choose some particular subjects, we can ensure that knowledge and life skills are covered completely.
On the other hand, I think that students should be free to choose whatever they want, because we always want to have a benefiical society with passion. If you have a passionate about some subjects, you can study easier and don’t be depressed. You can do it longer and better if you want to learn about it. Finally, nobody can predict what subjects will be useful in the future, so we should hearing our heart.
In conclusion, I always belive that students should learn base on their ability and passion, they can choose what they want and decide their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: go
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07818930041 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51816210932 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567901234568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4563396741 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.181818182 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.47004313372 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178475149468 0.084324248473 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152093829478 0.0667982634062 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291948705126 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181572909757 0.056905535591 319% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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