Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or reaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people maintain that nonsalaried community activity should be a obligated part of high schools projects ( for example working as a volunteer or improving neighborhood ... ). However, while doing unpaid community service has a positive impact on us, it can be argued that this projects should be a compulsory part in schools.
First of all, one significant advantages is that association service can help students get chances get more knowledge and gain good life skills. In schools, students don't have enough time to get realistic experience because of their homework, so they might not take part in extra activities. If the unpaid association service become a compulsory part, the students can join in more extracurricular activities they want. Students will be more confident, more mature and can help people around them. Secondly, an addition benefit is the certification will be given to you if you complete your work, and students can use it for their CV in the future. The last good reason is that it not only affect to students but also our country, it keeps contribute to develop our hometown by planting trees or cleaning city, etc ...
On the other hand, there are a little disadvantages. Students always have so much homework and extra classes that they're tired and can not join in community service. The second drawbacks is that they do not like or they take part in another activities and we can't force them to come back with school's activities.
To sum up, the benefits of this topic out weigh the drawbacks so i think that government should make a necessary unpaid association activities become a obligated part of high schools.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02919708029 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78319917661 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580291970803 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1838525289 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.833333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241764936028 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920145588664 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110077138485 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163024860704 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142285454696 0.056905535591 250% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.