A few people believe that the finest way to enhance road safety is to raise the least lawful age for driving a motor car or motorcycle. I totally disagree with this, I believe major road traffic accident happens by people who drink and drive; additionally, another major reason is people consume drug and drive, this not only endangers drivers but also threatens foot walkers.
Firstly, often road safety compromises due to some naive who drink and drive, consequently, it puts people in danger who walk on the street. In many developed nations, this is a common problem regardless of age. For example, in the USA 18% of car owners drink and drive occasionally, according to the recent survey conducted by the New York Times newspaper. It has also reported that 12% of car owners die or kill someone on the street in such accidents.
Secondly, drug addicts are another major reason why road accidents occur. In many developed nations, youngers are the drug victim, they consume drugs and drive a car or a motorbike. Drug addicts get an episode craving for drugs and become more aggressive while they are driving vehicles. In such a condition, they meet with road traffic accidents. In most cases, such accidents kill car drivers and put other people’s lives at stake. For instance, although street race is illegal in the USA it takes place at nights, and many hipsters race in exchange for money. Such events cause the dodging of road safety rules and regulations.
To conclude, as road safety is a concern there are many threats linked with it and to mitigate those threats the government should control alcohol sales and take out drugs off the street completely.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90845070423 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52199214041 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0226479319 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5714285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228559016253 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080505635617 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671238368718 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140597532023 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721170580084 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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