Some people think that dangerous sports such as boxing or motor-racing should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is a widespread perception that extreme sports such as boxing or motor-racing should be prohibited. Personally, I wholeheartedly disagree with this position.
To begin with, it is human’s freedom to choose what they want to do in their spare time. Some are in favor of adventurous feeling, so it would go against their will if a ban is imposed on risky sports. In other words, the aspiration to expose to new experience and push the physical and mental health to limits is justifiable as this could bring thrill seekers a sense of accomplishment. For this reason, there should be no regulation towards personal leisure pursuit. It should also be noted that the authorities can hardly take control over all of the individual activities and the places they are choosing for risk-taking. In fact, numerous action sports are performed in remote areas, which proves to be out of government’ management.
Opponents of dangerous sports argue that those partaking in these sports may be faced with accidents, serious injuries and even death. This is thus not sensible to put their life in unnecessary danger. However, they ignore the fact that extreme sports participants need to undergo days or months of training to increase their stamina before embarking on a risky sport. They are also supposed to be familiar with safety rules and procedures to avoid undesired repercussions. What is more, with the advancement of technology and the enhancement of equipment, embracing an adventure sport would no longer be an unreachable feat for those who long to conquer their fear and live their life to the fullest. There is no denying that any sports would be associated with certain elements of risk, having potential to inhibit ordinary people from getting out of their comfort zone. Still, with proper training and precautions, the possible hazards would be substantially mitigated.
In sum, for the reasons mentioned above, I would contend that extreme sports should not be made illegal. The overcoming of speed, height and depth would offer participants an unprecedented experience, thereby making their lives more fulfilling.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, still, thus, in fact, such as, in other words, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21865889213 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9176813633 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609329446064 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7465965063 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.294117647 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293337191461 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945033490971 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065940427289 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195330146985 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108031991144 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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