Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
I am from Mongolia, as in other developing countries, industrialization is becoming a hot topic today, because of the fact that almost in every state, manufacturing plants pollution in the air and infrastructure’s construction load noises can be seen. At that point, the environmental issue is not as hot as industrialization, it is known as a forgotten field in my country.
As one part of nature, it is our (human) responsibility to protect and sustain mother nature, especially at the moment, we are facing cruel climate change that is partly occurred due to human activity. For this reason, as long as the human act is occurring in all countries, equal responsibility should be taken by both developed and developing countries. For example, it not only manufacturing plant that generating toxic chemical compounds but also, common utilities namely refrigerator and fridge or from other categories, perfume, all together generates the toxic compound that brings us the world climate change.
From the other perspective, it is true developed countries have comparatively advanced capital and extensive experience than developing countries. This means, the economic possibility is higher in those countries to protect globally covered issues, as well as prevention, could be taken toward the environment. For instance, they have already experienced every stage of the development process which giving a point that they are one step further than developing one and, at the same time great experiences have achieved. Henceforth, every angle is proving that taking higher responsibility for climate change is the role of countries that are already developed.
In sum, it is everyone’s responsibility to care for mother nature and combat climate change, and giving all duty to some part is not the solution, also at the same time, in real-life, higher possibilities are in those developed countries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...lization is becoming a hot topic today, because of the fact that almost in every state, manufacturing pl...
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Line 4, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ities are in those developed countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41077441077 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30301485802 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565656565657 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.0524713204 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.7 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343049553805 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129040512086 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813727457283 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184146504378 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114772279718 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 50.2224549098 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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