Some people think that the government is wasting money on arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view ?
According to the statement, some individuals consider that legal authorities are misspended funds on arts or such exhibitions rater than to utilise on essential tasks which could vje better for nation. I completely agree with the statement and reasons are explained in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, although arts us important and major source of entertainment and creativity frame of mind. However, there are also another essential sectors which are undeveloped and authorities should be provide concentration and spend funds on them to make their services and conditions in superior manner. The first and foremost factor is, to give attention towards medical services of a nation. Because, there is higher proportion of residents which are suffering from poor medical facilities which leads to incline in mortality rate. For instance, in India, there are numerous states and areas such as slum areas, where medical and hospitality services are not available due to which, in every decade, number of individuals and especially children become died due to unhygienic conditions, poor medication and malnutrition. Therefore, government should provide free of charge medical facilities which becomes beneficial for national, because, via this manner, number of citizens become able to recieve superior health services.
Furthermore, the another factor is advancement in infrastructure which includes road connective system, transportation, organization,power and water supply so on. These all things play vital role in the development of a country. Because, if law makers spend funds to improve the infrastructure of a nation. Thus, they become able to export and import goods from foreign countries via superior transportation links which becomes as positive aspect for the economic progression. Apart from that, legal committees have to utilise part of funds in education system of their nation. Because, there is large count of children who are deficient from education due to poverty or unavailability of school in their areas. Due to this, nation may face catastrophic issues in further few decades. Because, progression of nation depends on present generation. Therefore, authorities should provide quality education to children by opening government schools or by providing scholarships. As a result, through this manner, nation will become migrate towards their progression in plenty of sector.
To recapitulate, I personally believe that, government should spend on another sectors rather than arts. Because, those another sections such as hospitality, infrastructure, education and so on will gives positive impression and leads to development of nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'exhibitions'' or 'exhibition's'?
Suggestion: exhibitions'; exhibition's
...es are misspended funds on arts or such exhibitions rater than to utilise on essential task...
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Line 2, column 205, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provided'?
Suggestion: provided
...e undeveloped and authorities should be provide concentration and spend funds on them t...
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Line 2, column 399, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n towards medical services of a nation. Because, there is higher proportion of resident...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , power
...ive system, transportation, organization,power and water supply so on. These all thing...
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Line 3, column 786, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...strophic issues in further few decades. Because, progression of nation depends on prese...
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Line 3, column 1066, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun sector seems to be countable; consider using: 'plenty of sectors'.
Suggestion: plenty of sectors
...me migrate towards their progression in plenty of sector. To recapitulate, I personally beli...
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Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...nfrastructure, education and so on will gives positive impression and leads to develo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2282.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71929824561 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12396740812 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553884711779 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 720.9 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8711482212 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.1 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.95 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0770520992095 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0246654837311 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310581395856 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549256051324 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365207541908 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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