Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Conducting an international event has its own advantages and disadvantages.
Due to which some people belive it is bad for the country, whereas some people
belive it;s good. Everyone has their own perspectives.
The main reason why people think it;s bad for the country is due to
the chances of conflicts which may occur due to excessive love for a certain country, which may lead to conflicts or arguements. While some belive
it is a waste of money and it does not benefit the country in any ways.
One of the incident which i recall is, durring a cricket match between
India and Pakistan. after India won a match Pakisthani Audience got voilent
as they couldn't control thier rage which resulted in loss of porperties.
While on the other side, hosting an international sports provides an opportunity
for people from various country to come together and share their love and affection
towards their country. This increses sportsman spirit among people. Apart from this
hosting a international event like Olympics, FIFA, Cricket world cup also helps in
development of the country. Hosting such big events attracts a lot of people's attention.
This may also lead to Increase in tourism. For example, Olympics is mostly hosted in a
developed country. Last time olympics was conducted in Tokiyo. After olympics
Tokiyo gained a lot of recogination from the world overall and attracted a lot of tourists. which indirectly
resulted in a rise in total GDP of the country.
I reckon that a country must host more international events as it is a opportunity for the country to grow and
also to build a good international relationships with other countries.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...bad for the country, whereas some people belive it;s good. Everyone has their own...
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...nflicts or arguements. While some belive it is a waste of money and it does not b...
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...in any ways. One of the incident which i recall is, durring a cricket match betw...
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...cket match between India and Pakistan. after India won a match Pakisthani Audience g...
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...akisthani Audience got voilent as they couldnt control thier rage which resulted in lo...
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...ether and share their love and affection towards their country. This increses spo...
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... among people. Apart from this hosting a international event like Olympics, FIFA...
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...s, FIFA, Cricket world cup also helps in development of the country. Hosting such...
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... example, Olympics is mostly hosted in a developed country. Last time olympics w...
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...ympics is mostly hosted in a developed country. Last time olympics was conducte...
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...was conducted in Tokiyo. After olympics Tokiyo gained a lot of recogination from...
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...verall and attracted a lot of tourists. which indirectly resulted in a rise in tota...
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Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...verall and attracted a lot of tourists. which indirectly resulted in a rise in tota...
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...cted a lot of tourists. which indirectly resulted in a rise in total GDP of the c...
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Suggestion: an
...host more international events as it is a opportunity for the country to grow and...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'relationship'?
Suggestion: relationship
...and also to build a good international relationships with other countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, whereas, while, apart from, for example, i reckon
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08695652174 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84839762676 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.119508529 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5882352941 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323199174245 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851410016216 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946929406624 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895512512345 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09661598823 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bad for the country, whereas some people belive it;s good. Everyone has their own...
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...nflicts or arguements. While some belive it is a waste of money and it does not b...
^^^
Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...in any ways. One of the incident which i recall is, durring a cricket match betw...
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Line 8, column 21, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...cket match between India and Pakistan. after India won a match Pakisthani Audience g...
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Line 9, column 9, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...akisthani Audience got voilent as they couldnt control thier rage which resulted in lo...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ether and share their love and affection towards their country. This increses spo...
^^^
Line 13, column 9, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... among people. Apart from this hosting a international event like Olympics, FIFA...
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Line 13, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...s, FIFA, Cricket world cup also helps in development of the country. Hosting such...
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Line 15, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... example, Olympics is mostly hosted in a developed country. Last time olympics w...
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Line 16, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ympics is mostly hosted in a developed country. Last time olympics was conducte...
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Line 16, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...was conducted in Tokiyo. After olympics Tokiyo gained a lot of recogination from...
^^^
Line 17, column 93, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...verall and attracted a lot of tourists. which indirectly resulted in a rise in tota...
^^^^^
Line 17, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...verall and attracted a lot of tourists. which indirectly resulted in a rise in tota...
^^^^^
Line 17, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cted a lot of tourists. which indirectly resulted in a rise in total GDP of the c...
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Line 19, column 70, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...host more international events as it is a opportunity for the country to grow and...
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Line 20, column 36, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'relationship'?
Suggestion: relationship
...and also to build a good international relationships with other countries.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, whereas, while, apart from, for example, i reckon
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08695652174 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84839762676 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.119508529 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5882352941 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323199174245 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851410016216 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946929406624 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895512512345 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09661598823 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.