Some people think that it is good for a country’s culture to broadcast foreign films and TV show. Others, however, think it is best to produce local films and shows. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
Cinema and television are not only the mediums of entertainment, but also tools to reflect and understand different cultures. It is believed by a few individuals that showing international movies and TV programs will enrich a nation's culture, but others favour that it is better to promote regional films and shows. In my opinion, there should be an equilibrium between the propagation of locally and internationally produced feature films and shows in order to get maximum benefit from these.
On the one hand, local films and TV programs project and promote regional customs and traditions. This helps in promotion and propagation of our cultural heritage. For example, famous Indian Tv series "Ramayana", that was showcased in 1980s on national television, helped me understand about our most valued historical saga of Lord Rama in detail. Besides that, locally produced shows create various job opportunities in the regional community, that tackles the unemployment problems to some extent. However, just relying on regional programs will lead to a tubular vision among viewers, as it will provide fewer occasions to observe and understand other cultures.
On the other hand, foreign pictures and tv shows enables us to appreciate art beyond the political boundaries. With the incorporation of newer technologies like internet and satellite television, it is possible to watch international programs while sitting comfortably at home. Nowadays, with the help of international news channels, we receive a more unbiased news at the blink of our eyes. However, over-dependence on global media has a downside too, as it interferes with the promotion of regional content. As a result, the production of local films and tv shows decline significantly.
To conclude, although foreign films and shows gives us opportunity to observe artistic creations from different parts of the world, the regional movies and programs should also be promoted, as they propagate our culture and tradition across the seas.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: in the 1980s
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47756410256 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16574359795 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0375220768 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.071428571 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204176732074 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717662024359 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574006328101 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125497728654 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185030059225 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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