Some people think it is important to construct new buildings rather than wasting money on maintaining old ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Indubitably, the essence of modernity has spread its tentacles into building structure in the later part of the 20th century. Many people believe that build new buildings are more vital than wasting amount on traditional one. I partially agree with this notion, this essay will critique both sides and give pertinent reasons before forming my reasonable conclusion.
Developing modern infrastructure is much more convenient rather than olders one, it has numerous reasons, the intelligent structure of skyscraper has become the hub of multinational companies centre also more than one thousand floors apartment consume hundreds of people in one place, hence it would be more beneficial to save natural reserve land. Moreover, new construct flyovers and roads could help inhabitants to reach destination in seconds for example newly build Howrah bridge which is built on Yamuna river people can reach Kolkata in seconds, therefore it could help to reduce destination in order to produce pollution which is made by transportation.
on the flip side, despite being modernized colonisation ancient buildings are as important as new buildings it has two rudimentary reasons firstly, the traditional structure has been attracted foreigners since they made. The government can generate income from tourists as tax for visiting older buildings. To exemplify in the surat old fort is making huge money from visitors, finally, it would be helpful for authority to make enormous amount. older infrastructure is not only fruitful for the government but also many human beings, as they work there, for example, tourist guide can earn money from tourist.
In conclusion, I recapitulate that although the older infrastructure is a source of income of many people also preserve our traditional value, newly developed infrastructure would be more advantageous in some ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50174216028 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96512199196 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644599303136 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.9776160652 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.9 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202691851626 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756842606347 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654773014894 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114803091546 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629961278056 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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