Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.
Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, many working people prefer to spend their weekends to recover from a hard lifestyle, that they have spent throughout the week, following certain styles of relaxation. A group of people believes in activities that help in improving their minds while others consider rest is significant. This essay will discuss how relaxation and mind helping activities play a vital role in and an individual’s regular life.
On one hand, Individuals should adopt the habit of proper sleep of 8 hours every day which would help in healing their bodies as well as maintaining the hormonal balance by keeping the heart and other organs to stay calm. The habit of improper sleep is the major cause for many life-threatening diseases such as diabetes, cancer and so on. A recent survey that was published in the newspaper states that people who decline proper sleeping are highly prone to deadly diseases such as hypertension, Insomnia and so on.
On the other hand, implementing the practice of mind developing such as reading and solving puzzles and so on is equally significant as it slows down the blood flow to the brain and reduces its temperature. When performing these activities during leisure, promotes a diversion from routine thus, helping to improve focus, memory and problem-solving skills. For example, solving word and math puzzles can help to improve language, arithmetic skills and so on.
This essay discussed how proper rest helps for helps a person physically and mentally but also how mind-developing activities help in promoting mental health. In my opinion, both resting and activities like reading and puzzle solving are important for a healthy lifestyle and help in protecting one from life-threatening conditions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28057553957 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97910359451 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611510791367 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.6242930713 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.454545455 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185714723556 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752363108985 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473981900328 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113217923186 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042566495091 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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