Some people think it is more important to spend time developing a successful career while others think it is more important to spend time with friends and family. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In this competitive era, everyone runs for their bread and butter. One group of people believe that individuals should more time to expand their businesses or jobs because it is more crucial. However, another group of people opines that it is more beneficial to spend their quality time with their family and close ones. I will discuss both the perspectives and put my opinion in further ensuring paragraphs.
On the one hand, there are many reasons behind people should do more hard work for their job. First and foremost, one is people get a high standard of living. To illustrates this, when people give more focus on their existing job, they can get promotions and even doubled the salaries. As a result, ultimately it is very beneficial for their family, and buy luxurious items such as cars, houses and many more also they can pay their extra tuitions fee for their children. In addition, prestigious achievements in a career which brings high status, respected post and make their family proud in society.
On the other hand, it is necessary to dedicate the time to family and children rather than spending much time on making a good career. The person ignoring their family and friends can easily be lost trust in him. Moreover, no one takes stand for him when person is in hard situations. In addition, individuals migrate to a metropolis to improve their career and cannot dedicate to much time for children as a result, children have a lack of moral values discipline of society. Ultimately it has a negative impact on their social life and personal life.
To conclude, choosing a career it brings a luxurious life and status in society. Whereas, it has a negative impact on friend and their families. In my opinion, a person should make a balance between career and family to get a favourable result.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82692307692 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55307725785 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525641025641 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7482335796 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5882352941 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187704086959 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651133526646 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618262385453 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123189878449 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569913864717 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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