"The cars we drive say a lot about us." One of the most controversial issues today relates to the compulsion of retaking a driving test after every fifth year. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view.
On one side of the arguement, there are people who argue that the driving test should be retaked after every fifth year. The main reason for believing that is regular updation of traffic rules. Many new traffic rules are introduced by the government but many people are not familiar with them. So, if a retake driving test will introduced in the country, then the individuals will learn the newly updated rules. It will also help to reduce road accidents. So, the compulsion of a retake driving test will help people to remain updated.
On the other hand, it is also to make the opposing case. It is often argued that introduction of a retake driving test will cause many problems among individuals. People often have this opinion because it will waste the time and money. If a retake driving test will introduced then it will also charged a fees. No-one wants to pay money after every fifth year just only for their driving license! Moreover, if it will happens, then, more workplaces and workers will be required for this which will not been beneficial for government also.
As we have seen, there are number of answers to this question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that government should make some new rules and regulations which will be satisfying for both individuals and government.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'introduce'
Suggestion: introduce
...them. So, if a retake driving test will introduced in the country, then the individuals wi...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cause it will waste the time and money. If a retake driving test will introduced t...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'introduce'
Suggestion: introduce
...nd money. If a retake driving test will introduced then it will also charged a fees. No-on...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'charge'
Suggestion: charge
... test will introduced then it will also charged a fees. No-one wants to pay money after...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a fee', 'a feis' or simply 'fees'?
Suggestion: a fee; a feis; fees
...ll introduced then it will also charged a fees. No-one wants to pay money after every ...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
...r driving license! Moreover, if it will happens, then, more workplaces and workers will...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...will not been beneficial for government also. As we have seen, there are number o...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...me new rules and regulations which will be satisfying for both individuals and government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80970149254 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47539405766 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529850746269 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2465888259 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289705223528 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102017217708 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749879062057 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176717296148 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512407059876 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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