Some people think money is the best gift to give to youngsters, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Money brings happiness in the life of youngsters as it fulfill their demands. Giving money as a gift to blooming buds really helps parents to teach about the money management skills, however its negative impacts on the children cannot be overlooked.
To begin with, some people believe that coins are the best present for youngsters due to plethora of reasons. In this way, they learn about the importance and management of currency which is necessary for them in further life. Furthermore, adolescents can cope with their needs such as they can buy pen, pencil and others personal belongings. To illustrate, In my home country almost every parent give money to youngsters as encouragement so that they can concentrate on their study or also learn about the money management. Consequently, The youngsters would be wise enough that they would not use money in inappropriate way.
On the downside, money has also some negative impacts on children. if parents give money to youngsters than will spend it unnecessarily without asking from them. In this way, some teenagers instead of eating home-made food would prefer junk food and suffer from health related issues such as obesity. Additionally, the young ones will indulge themselves in drugs if they have a sufficient amount of money. As a result, multiple teenagers are losing their life every year.
In conclusion, my personal prospective is that it is important to give gift as money to children as it teach them about the value of money but the parents should also ask from them regularly that where they spend money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, look, really, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05747126437 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71434779903 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5221838197 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.538461538 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181214750759 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671478895228 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502191537808 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125746335778 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163985905918 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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