Some people think that museums and art galleries should concentrate on the history and art of their own country rather than the works of art of other parts of the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Museums and art galleries play a vital role in preserving and conveying historical values for a long time. It is argued that they should focus on displaying works that represent the nation's culture and history better than international works. In my opinion, Although I agree with the first view because the local art and historical works can promote great patriotism, we also should not ignore the importance of foreign art and history.
On the one hand, there are reasons why it is believed that domestic art and historical works should be given priority. Firstly, All kinds of local works displayed in museums and art galleries recreate the chronological flow and cultural values of one nation. By going to these museums and galleries, people will gain a deeper understanding of their nation, thus, ensures one's love and pride for one's country. For instance, the War Remnants Museum in Ho Chi Minh city possesses a series of themed rooms with military equipment and graphic photographs depicting war crime and have a chance to know about ancestors bravely sacrificed themselves for the independence of VietNam. Therefore, the exhibitions serve an educational purpose as they instil patriotism and promote a sense of national pride. In addition, in the era of globalization, culture integration is threatening many unique cultures, and thence, the display of their works and artifacts will help to preserve their culture and the cultural diversity of a nation.
On the other hand, showing international works of art has several merits. The historical and art works from other parts of the world will allow the public to acquire a proper understanding of different nations' political and social issues as well as their distinct cultures, which is a vital factor fostering globalization. Furthermore, if museums display international works, they will attract more people to come to visit, which apparently supports the economy.
In conclusion, for the aforementioned reasons, I am convinced that it is necessary for museums and art galleries to display both types of local and foreign works.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
... on displaying works that represent the nations culture and history better than interna...
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Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...standing of their nation, thus, ensures ones love and pride for ones country. For in...
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Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
..., thus, ensures ones love and pride for ones country. For instance, the War Remnants...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26567164179 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93374677281 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564179104478 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3487063077 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.692307692 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6153846154 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281324349843 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106554557824 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638217918102 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182081941788 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629030599738 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
... on displaying works that represent the nations culture and history better than interna...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...standing of their nation, thus, ensures ones love and pride for ones country. For in...
^^^^
Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
..., thus, ensures ones love and pride for ones country. For instance, the War Remnants...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26567164179 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93374677281 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564179104478 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3487063077 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.692307692 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6153846154 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281324349843 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106554557824 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638217918102 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182081941788 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629030599738 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.