Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Others however believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these view and give your opinion.
There are two different attitude about teaching children how to be a good member of community. Although some people know school responsible, I think it is better for a children to be taught by parent.
Nowadays, education has been increased and all kids had accessibility of learning. Some people think educational system should have an appropriate plan to teach children how could be a decent member of their society. In fact this outlook believe, there is not any adequate criteria which can assess the competency of parents, in other word, if they were not good enough, they won’t be able to rear their children appropriately. Moreover, some parents who also have good knowledge of society behavior, may have not enough time because of today’s involvements. So that school should be considered as the best choice why children also make connection with it sooner than other parts of a society.
On the other hand, I think all parents who decide to have a child should know related responsibility, in other word parents must try to increase their responsibility before any other activity. Furthermore we should not forget that, children normally go to school at the age 6 or 7, if they have not learn many social behaviors or have learn conversely, their behaviors could hardly be changed. In fact although all children learn as they are growing up, first years of their life should not be missed. In addition it has been said that, we should know, impressiveness of parents on their children are very more than any other parameters, moreover, this identity cause to drop of education cast dramatically.
On the whole, I could infer, rarely could we change the bad behavior of children when get the habit, in addition if we want to decrease the expense of education and also increase the efficiency, it is better to teach children about social behavior from home.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...l responsible, I think it is better for a children to be taught by parent. Nowadays, edu...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...sponsibility before any other activity. Furthermore we should not forget that, children nor...
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Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...ool at the age 6 or 7, if they have not learn many social behaviors or have learn con...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...not learn many social behaviors or have learn conversely, their behaviors could hard...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r have learn conversely, their behaviors could hardly be changed. In fact althoug...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... of their life should not be missed. In addition it has been said that, we should know, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ildren about social behavior from home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, i think, in addition, in fact, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96825396825 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80417570073 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536507936508 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.2931216229 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.416666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322908125883 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135935517386 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801770422609 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214085727731 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103431789689 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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