Some people think that parents should teach children how to be a good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is undeniably true that everyone need to be good part of society. Some people think that the parents should train their kids to obtain this ability, but others feel that school is more appropriate for such purposes. From my point of view, in order to become youths a positive member of community, both school and parents act as crucial role.
On the one hand, those who believe children should be taught by their parents might argue parents have responsible for this. This is because being parent means that you will responsible for this child’s future and what part of community will be. For example, kids often replicate their parents’ behavior, which means it is more likely to duplicate their contribution of society. Therefore, parents should focus more on their actions. What’s more, they ought to simply explain what society is even they are taught at school and they need to often cooperate with school to run some events about the public.
On the other hand, school is also important for becoming good person for public. The reason for this is the school is the place that they spent at least 5 hours a day and that the kids take part of society. For example, pupils are able to communicate with lots of people, which are the elements of society, at school, and learn themselves the tons of skills from a communication. In contrast, child who takes a homeschooling may have no opportunity to gain this kind of ability.
In conclusion, due to the reasons I mentioned above, I believe that both school and parents have considerable effects on children’s development and being positive component of the group of people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, therefore, at least, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90714285714 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67386252757 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3661668917 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.692307692 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273159598853 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102892582643 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496644280696 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177658602288 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575838163401 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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