Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of job should be highly paid?
That entertainers such as singer, actor earn higher amount of money compared with others is true. I think that there are lots of other kinds of jobs need to have highly salaries, and I agree with this statement. In this following paragraphs, I will mention that other sorts of works.
First of all, nowadays, celebrities like a well-known star, singer are getting the greater amount of wages. The reason for this is that they are known well around the world, and they took place in other branches especially commercial. For example, organizations, recent years, tend to choose the celebrities as their own face, which means that their resources of salaries are expanding. However, on the one hand, it is good for them earning more money. On the other hand, it might interrupt them for focusing on their main position.
Second of all, as I see, there are some kinds of professions that should be greatly paid. Generally, in my opinion, that state budget jobs such as teacher, physician and policeman should take more attraction from government about their wages. This is because if they have lower wages, they will not be encouraged to do their work and satisfied. Thus, they might have to leave their jobs. As a result lack of specialist will have emerged. For instance, recently nurses are going to abroad for making fortune since in foreign countries they offer them a higher salary. in order to avoid such absences, the government should focus more on their workforces desire.
In conclusion, due to the facts and reasons I mentioned above, from my point of view, there still are other types of professions that should have better wages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89247311828 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50973362387 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573476702509 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5377963252 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3125 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160402909851 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523391457376 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482340742814 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096082577369 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385557369676 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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