Some people think reading stories in books is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this technology-driven world, the offsprings spend too much time on smart devices instead of getting efficiently information through the books. Whether it is better for them to acquire knowledge by reading books or encourange them to use technological items skillfully. I strongly believe that raising the young to desire in reading is the best orientation of the parents.
Firstly, Although, advanced technology brings a more convenient life but the knowledge from books as well as newpapers still play a vital role. indeed, inforcing children to improve their reading skill could broaden their horizon, enhance them to learn new things and especially improving communication skill. For instance, the research from a group of student in ABC university has shown the difference between children who have a habit to reading has a confident while talking to the elder than those who just consuming time in smart devices. due to the soon awareness of these children, they do not feel confused when facing to the hard question from the other. According to those elements has been stated, the caregivers nowadays has to require the children to read the books usually to enhance knowledge.
Secondly, reading book is superior to glueing eyes on screen because of the improvement of brain working process. Particularly, this good habit could raise the concentration level as well as monitor brain works which create the smart reaction while children have to deal with serious problem. For example, a group of scientists from Nagakawa university has pointed out that keeping the children away from smart device could maximize their concentrational time which increases up to 35 minutes. indeed, people who living in this day always neglect due to other irrelative elements. Futhermore, monitoring brain works help children to link it to brain then this good behavior leads to the correctly decision because of their carefully thinkings.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that the reading skills plays a vital role in the children’s life, which provide them the correctly awareness about the social issue. Thus, it would be a smart orientation of the parents, if they inforce their offsprings to get informations from the books or newspapers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3137254902 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88344296708 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585434173669 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1384197594 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.466666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157549911671 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054313233024 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317277790301 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971433570336 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289258619011 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.