Some people think that to spend or enjoy money once they earn it, but others think that to save the money and to enjoy it in the future. What stand do you agree with and Why? Give the specific reasons and examples which support your opinion.
Money in the form of currency notes acts as an indispensable necessity for the people to survive in their precious lives, however some individuals opine, it is better for them to utilize earning money immediately but I completely disagree with this notion because saving money is an effective method for the individuals, due to this, they become able to flourish their circumstances, especially in the upcoming future.
To commence with, needs and preferences pertained to the future can be easily fulfilled through the reserve part of finance. As, sometimes it is become essential for the parents to arrange the currency notes for their offsprings related to the educational qualification.For instance, a survey was conducted by the researchers which showed, a student who will receive maximum knowledge through the high level courses, can only become able to achieve a high status, these types of scenario push the progenitors to adopt this measure mainly for their children's life which can make their surroundings more convivial.
In addition to this, retained money can make the future life less complicated in comparison with the present time. This is because, distinct types of occasion can be arised in the futuristic world and they can be able to enjoy this enticing moment with least tension. For example, in a few countries, it is commonly seen that the individuals have to spend a large amount of finance on marriage functions, so this type of obstacle can be perfectly abbreviated through this peculiar measure of saving money from the income.
To conclude, money is become a first and last step to accomplish every work upto an end point. Although, the people have faced a lot of problems during the present time for the adoption of this method, but still the government should take other steps to make people more aware about it because it can make their future life more enjoyable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, still, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08945686901 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76974878541 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568690095847 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.443397441 49.4020404114 278% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.125 106.682146367 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.125 20.7667163134 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126867232827 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060932651201 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392282521212 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842412650018 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047144370637 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.0946893788 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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