It is irrefutable that education plays an indispensable role in everyone's life. Some individuals opine that private schools are a better choice for students to make their future bright while other opponents disagree with this notion. In this essay, I will discuss the both views as well as my opinion in the subsequent paragraphs.
There are various reasons why I believe that private secondary schools are beneficial for learners. To begin with, the classroom of these schools are smaller in size. It is really easy for students to gain the individual attention from teachers. For instance, if students face the difficulty regarding to any subjects such as math, science or even in any stream than they may freely ask to their teachers to sort out their queries. Moreover, private schools have a better infrastructure facilities as compared to government schools. These schools offer libraries, well equipped labs, playgrounds and spacious classrooms. Also, the transportation facility is too good for the safety of childrens.
Furthermore, private schools provide better academic and extracurricular programs which creats the interest among scholars to compete with each other. It improves not only the performance of students but also encourage them to do better in both activities. Finally, these schools have strict rules and regulations. Likewise, students never try to break the rules for the reputation of private secondary schools. That's why there is no violence in these schools compared to government.
On the other hand, there are certain effects which can not be ignored. Firstly, the tuition fees of private schools is very expensive instead of government schools. Majority of students belong to a middle or poor class family, so it's not much easy for them to bear the higher expenses of these schools. Secondly, the study pattern of private schools is totally different from government because they put extra burden on learners to escalate their knowledge. In some cases, it is compulsory for students to learn Greek and Sanskrit language.
To sum up, I would like to opine that private schools are providing quality of education which is more demanding in various sectors of society. However, they should give some relaxation from fee so that everyone can afford the higher education. In this way, we can minimize the limitations of these schools.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, in some cases, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1990.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26455026455 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79531375869 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568783068783 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3440834505 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5217391304 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4347826087 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1739130435 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286552462868 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081854838763 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589073009873 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166465867583 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208116007598 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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