Some people think that video games are advantageous, while others believe video games are harmful to
the people who play them.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people think that playing video games is beneficial to their users while others say that video
games are more disadvantageous. I will discuss both sides of this argument in my
essay below and give my personal view in the conclusion.
On the one hand, playing video games has some advantages. Firstly, games help their
players relax and therefore improve their work efficiency afterwards. This is extremely
important for both working people and students who have to deal with increasing workload nowadays
. Secondly, playing games also have some educational purposes. For
example, many modern games are designed with English instructions, and players around the world can
play together and communicate in English. This motivates players to learn English in order to play the
games well.
On the other hand, playing video games frequently causes several problems for players. To begin with, such an activity is really addictive and sometimes takes away too much time, which will make it extremely difficult for people to get out and do exercise. Consequently,
these people are likely to suffer from a lot of diseases, such as back pain or maybe obesity, due to this
lack of physical exercise (Supporting sentence). The second disadvantage of playing games is that it can
distract players, especially young students, from their study or work. For instance, my
younger brother used to spend hours playing games every day, and now his scores at school are really
low.
In conclusion, playing video games is both advantageous and disadvantageous in many aspects. And in
my view, the extent to which each user of video games is affected is different and more or less depends
on how much time he or she spends on those games.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... deal with increasing workload nowadays . Secondly, playing games also have some ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, more or less, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17253521127 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67527695802 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609154929577 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0090112179 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38451056644 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141566104963 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109581795672 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122365255948 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113392019526 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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