More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, car and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, car and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, the thriving of the economy with the emergence of millions of firms leads to a variety of products. The variety results in the competition of different brand, thus to exist in the severe business environment, it is necessary that companies must erect their own brands differentiating them between the others. The reason is when markets have enormous categories of products, costumers choose the well-known because of their belief in the firm producing those items. Therefore, it is not a puzzle why people fancy to buy products from renowned brands by which they can choose high-quality and reputational goods. This essay agrees with the perspective of advocating the development of branding in the new business world.
On the one hand, a famous brand vastly benefits to a seller in manifold aspects. Most typical, the belief of customers, taken much effort to build, and spanning years to years, directs the success of the company. However, when achieving, company gain substantial loyal customers assisting companies when launching the new or sustain mature products. The belief of customers brings to companies long-term success which is the desire of almost companies when participating in the business. In the context of political and economic upheaval, the new trend emerging lastly, consequencing from the globalization, companies having long-term and stable revenue from loyal customers can endure in the business environment. Not only the advantage in attracting customers, but a well-known brand also has its usefulness in attracting talents into companies. People with the qualified ability not only desire a high salary, but they also want to work in a famous and professional working environment to demonstrate themselves value. With those people, personal value is extremely significant hence a influential brand is a perfect choice for them.
On the other hand, customers also earn their consumer purposes as choosing a famous brand. Usually, use-value is the most momentous because each type of good has a distinct function and of course, a product came from a famous company are often known as high-quality and useful. Therefore, customers can make a straightforward choice and not waste time and money in choosing and testing. With some products as car, cloth…, people not only care about use-value, they also regard the image value which can highlight and expose their style. The small and unfamous brands can not deal with this demand of customers and in these circumstances, big brands are the only choice.
In conclusion, branding now has an irreplaceable in the business environment. Companies should choose a strict strategy to build their brand more famous and steady.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1088, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, lastly, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, of course, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2287.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35597189696 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9398498747 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531615925059 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 694.8 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9252739502 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.35 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.35 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175382915364 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542416076762 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432353608347 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116003177624 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252909757438 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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