It is a highly controversial debate that whether female candidates ought to be welcomed or not like males into various things such as the army, the navy and the air force. I completely agree that the women should be permitted to the above-mentioned categories because it is generally evidenced by medical professionals that female candidates have the same strength, the same muscle tone as men which lead them to prefer their choices.
To begin with, it is often said that across the globe numerous female athletes achieve Golden and Bronze medals for their colossal efforts since their bodies sufficiently strengthen to their vigorous activities, even in some cases women defeat men that there are several examples. For instance, Indian Badminton PV Sindhu who has a stiff body; likewise the fastest runner in Indian jurisdiction who has also the perfect strength. Therefore, the above-mentioned favourable characteristics which are available in females also lead to play a crucial role as men in the army, navy and the airforce industry.
Moreover, concerning physical strength, the medical professionals unveiled after years' investigation that the female candidates are eligible to take a prominent role like men in any sector. Furthermore, it is stated that the gender variations might not be considered seriously, once huge passion and patriotism towards their nation, which must be taken into consideration, regardless of gender segregation. Besides, in the past five years, there are numerous applications were commissioned from females on such courses; unfortunately, which were completely abandoned.
In conclusion, having considered enough physical strength, huge passion and patriotism towards the home country, female applicants should be welcomed like men in all the categories such as the army, the navy and the air force industries. Indeed, in the forthcoming generations, both gender is equally be distributed in all fields.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54362416107 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09713910221 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570469798658 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.86056071 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.2 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164500009566 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639950921183 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513010622533 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108809668272 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494033755785 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 50.2224549098 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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