In today’s society, it is believed by many that career has the most significant role in one’s life; therefore life is not complete without the victory from work. This essay will argue that splendid career is just one of the many aspects that together contribute to satisfaction in life.
It cannot be denied that job plays a significant role in one’s life. According to a survey, conducted by the University of Toronto, working time accounts for approximately two-thirds of a person’s life. So if the job is according to people’ nature and it flourishes then seventy five percent of the stress would be removed from their lives. Moreover, if a person gets stuck in an unsuccessful career which leads to dissatisfaction, it could also have critical effect on person’s life such as, stress and despair.
Conversely, apart from a successful career, there are many other desirable goals which make the life sparkling and meaningful. As for many people, meaningful life means to help others and they devote their lives to charity work. Additionally, there are people who even do not have any career and are still contented. For example, in some Asian countries like Pakistan, women stay at home, take care of children and house while men are the breadwinners. Women feel that it is a deep-rooted ritual and their lives are meaningful and peaceful without any career.
This essay argued that people who believe that achievement from career has the most vital impact in life just see the only one perspective of life and underestimates the other important parameters which together make the successful life. In my opinion, a prosperous career is one of the many elements that lead towards a happy and contented life and one can even live a meaningful life deprived of a glittering career.
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...pos;s life such as, stress and despair. Conversely, apart from a successful care...
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...l life deprived of a glittering career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, third, while, apart from, as for, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10367892977 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93761642715 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551839464883 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6810102862 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.384615385 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327474353191 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119931486494 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652263744533 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210555772418 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399793784307 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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