Some people think that young people should choose their profession themselves. Others believe that their parents should choose for them.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Choosing a career is a life-changing decision and should be given some serious thoughts before making a choice. It is often argued on who should make this decision, whether to let the younger generation choose for themselves, or should parents step in and make that decision. This essay agrees with the former but will discuss both views of the argument.
Young people should be free to decide on what profession they want to pursue. Moreover, by letting them do this, we are enabling them to become more responsible and independent. It is evident that people wants different things and their choices may not always agree with their parents. But, by trusting them, we give them the opportunity to learn through their experiences that they can apply to help themselves find success and happiness. In fact, a lot of people found fame and fortune just by simply listening to what their heart’s desire and following their dreams.
However, many also believes that parents know their children better and therefore have a better idea on what career path should their child take. After all, every parent wants a bright future for their child therefore entrusting them would be the best thing to do. But, in my opinion, unless the child shares the same view, they will eventually lose interest, fail to find passion or happiness in what they are doing and regret following their parent’s advice. In fact, many students drop out or shift course primarily because of these reasons.
In conclusion, although it is true that parent by nature would want nothing but the best for their children, the later is just as able in making decisions for themselves. Nevertheless, it is always important to be true to oneself because success is not only measured in terms of monetary gain, but more importantly, by finding happiness or a sense of purpose on what you are doing.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, after all, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94920634921 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56936228955 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584126984127 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7646467037 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.357142857 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368376732478 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112430840772 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590800816702 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192831071008 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680387414689 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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