Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
Some people condemn that animals that live in a zoo are being ripped off their freedom and should be set free to live in their natural habitats. While I acknowledge that it is inhumane to put animals in cages, I agree with those who consider that zoos can be used to conserve wild animals.
On the one hand, there are known reasons why zoos are being considered cruel. Protestors point out that living in a zoo results in a loss of natural characteristics of wild animals. Research shows that, for example, hunting skills of tamed tigers are not compatible with those living in the wild. Another thing that is being condemned is the behavior of visitors. Some tourists try to provoke animals by poking branches or throwing rocks at animals while they are sleeping.
Despite such negative impacts, It seems to me that zoos can be used to preserve wild animals. First, injured animals from human activities or natural conflicts can be treated in a zoo before reintroducing to the wild. We can cure such animals to ensure that they are able to survive in their natural habitats, which obviously is more aggressive compared to a zoo. These activities not only protect endangered species but also increase proliferation rates. Second, with the right approach, zoos can promote human’s awareness about wildlife and enhance appreciation as well as practical steps to conserve the beauties of wild animals.
In conclusion, in my opinions, zoos can play a role in preserving wild animals provided that we focus on this aspect and impose measures to eliminate unwanted effects.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, well, while, another thing, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02651515152 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6864260192 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594696969697 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3931219223 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.076923077 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301600007676 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115318063648 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702157039852 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187492777256 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682317481187 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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