Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.
Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
At the 21st century, the act of preserving wildlife is becoming a serious problem to the world. With the construction of zoos, people can ensure the safety for rare or nearly extinct animals. However, there is an opinion state that zoos are inhumane and they need to be shut down immediately. In this essay, I will analyze both sides, therefore giving my own point.
At one side, zoos are the best place to keep animals which need secure protection. Due to the highly increased of uncontrolled hunting, the ability to look after wild creatures is getting worse. And so, zoos are made, so the protectors can keep everything in check. Furthermore, zoos are the key to maintain and develop the biodiversity. If we can’t keep the divide between animals, our natural resources will run out quickly. Another reason to keep the zoos is we can make animals feel closer to our human being, so they can somehow feel we’re their best friends.
On the other hand, zoos’ condition is still a major problem that requests instant fix. Some zoos have the worst condition for animals, for example the lack of supply for water or food, which can cause extreme harm. Next, the zoo keepers sometimes treat the creatures badly, such as beating or hurting them. The freedom to the outside world is always sought by caged animals, so they feel lonely and stuck. And if the requirements are not fulfilled, a riot from the wild might happen, and catastrophe consequences are expected.
In my opinion, I think zoos are important, but we should gradually enhance and rise up the quality of them. To make animals feel better and protected, we must be their friends, not their enemies.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, for example, i think, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56294456061 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620209059233 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.1133931919 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.0 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267899546379 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747143150798 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516720647461 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155904913768 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355510648859 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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