Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think it is better to work for different organisations.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It is often argued that individuals should continue to work for a single company throughout their career, whilst others disagree and opine that it is beneficial if one works for various companies instead. This essay disagrees that people should work for multiple organisations and it will discuss both viewpoints.
Staying in a firm throughout one’s entire career can be more beneficial than changing jobs as it promotes job security without them needing to worry about not being able to find a new job. It also allows employees to have an increment in remuneration on a yearly basis, whereas one might earn lesser when switching to a new job. A study by Harvard University on Michigan State in 2015 found that subjects who stayed in one company until retirement averaged a salary of 10% to 15% higher than those who worked for two or more companies. Those that worked two or more jobs throughout their careers faced unemployment for an average 1.5 years.
However, many disagree and feel that it is better if one works for several companies. This is because individuals might feel unsettled in a company or decide to have a career switch to pursue their interests. Despite this, when considering a change in jobs, they will need factor in their remuneration that they will earn in their new job and the possibility of career advancements. For instance, an employment agency did a survey on people that had a career switch. It was found that 60% of respondents felt unsatisfied with their new jobs as it was different from what they had expected it to be.
In conclusion, while working in one company throughout one’s career is beneficial due to job security, one might feel the need to change a job as they are unsatisfied with their current one. However, when doing so, many considerations need to be made and prior research need to be done. As a result, working continuously for a company can be clearly beneficial.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90881458967 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79871711844 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519756838906 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7450750434 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.357142857 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2231603498 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103571388197 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956068731457 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171592573989 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101351015414 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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