Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.
Nowadays, interest toward dangerous sports is becoming increasing popular. For many people, especially young blood, this type of activity is attractive one. In this essay, I will discuss some of the main reasons why people want to jump in danger and suggest ways in which we can reduce risk of their life.
There are ample reasons to put their self in to dangers. One of the main reason why people go for dangerous activity is that they get the thrill out of them. They like to taking risks. They want to challenge their abilities and potentials. In addition, after doing such kind of activity they feel sense of satisfaction. They become very happy when they face fear. Furthermore, going through a dangerous experience gives them courage and confidence to handle any kind of problems in day to day life.
Another reasons for involving into this type of sports is that they can get lots of money and chance to become famous in entire world. They get attention by doing stunts on motorcycle jumping from top building. They get chance to put their name in newspaper headlines. People also prefer to watch live stunts on TV channel. After their stunts they become celebrity. They feel grate when they find their name in the Guinness Book of World Records. There is also chance to get gob on the basis of their skills.
I think life is more important than money and fame that’s why we have to think about safety first. Firstly, these sports should be done under strict supervision. All safety precautions should be taken. Such sports should be done after some training. We have to put age restriction for these kind of activities. Some people gives suggestion to put ban on these but I don’t feel that banning is best solution for it. If we put ban , people who want to do that do it unofficially and they get injured. We have to put all our efforts to make less danger in these games.
All things considered, to get involved in dangerous sports is never easy. You need to weigh up the pros of fame , money, increase courage level and so on , and the cons like put life in danger. However, such sports should be performed after sufficient training from licensed company and under some supervision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, i think, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72020725389 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45343628297 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515544041451 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2069295026 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0714285714 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7857142857 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254753267275 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672235442011 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571212762682 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153104247533 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612464901511 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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