Some universities admit students on the basis of academic grades while others prefer interviews and personal statements. Discuss
In todays mordern senario education is more important in life. it has been observed that in some universities students are getting admisssion on the basis of academic grades again its has been visulized that some universities prefer interview and personal statment of amit students.
In my opinion i can say that universities should take admission on the basis of interview and personal statment because it is seen that student who are having high grades that can be taken by giving money to that school or institute and the student geeting grades higher it can be by mugging up the course and just writting in exam and getting high scores but if we take the interview we can see that student have thorughly understood the topic and it will never been foget by him in his carrer.
In addition to it we can say that interview and the personal statment can judge the student capability and it is been seen that one electrician who was not geeting grade in school times at one site the electrician was called to repair the light and the wirerings no electrician were able to say that what was the fault over there but when he came into that room and by observing he said that here is the fault into the holder and a wellknown statment we all know that a book cannot be judge by its cover.
In conclusion we can say that universities should addmit student on basis of the interview and personal statments by doing these educational society will be more developed and student will get chance to prove themself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64794007491 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58093472055 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49063670412 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 173.231175023 49.4020404114 351% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 248.2 106.682146367 233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.4 20.7667163134 257% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257279939207 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160587365131 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135467395096 0.0667982634062 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188824504473 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103111793471 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.2 13.0946893788 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.58 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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