Many developments have been made on agriculture field by countries for last centuries. Even though many methods are got for improving agriculture, lots of poeple still suffer hungry, also even die. In my view point, the root of this problem lies in the outdated agriculture system that should be modernised.
Some countries face adverse weather conditions like flood, drought, etc. and these cause to halt the production on agriculture. And what is worse, if these weather conditions continue year after year, countries that witness these natural events, will need help from other countries. On the other hand, people live on Africa continent, mainly face with hunger however the population still increases exponently. Governments are trying to solve their agricultural problems by using innovations that are explored by modern countries. The problem is, these innovations will show their help in the long time, but countries need improving themselves urgently and they start to use other innovations and give up from the existing innovation. For me, there are the reasons of why some countries face agricultural problems.
I think that many things can do for solve these problems. Firstly, countries that sent food aimd to needed countries must understand that their aid will not solve their problems and the given aid will hurt more than it helps. Other countries must build new facilities, schools, new farm places to improve the living standards. Besides, they must supply necessary modern farming equipments to modernise their agriculture to needed countries. Secondly, after governments decide to use an innovation on agriculture, they must not use this method as temporary, they must use for a long time to see the benefits.
In conclusion, the amount of water that is used to water the grass on modern golf course is equal to the amount of water that is very needed for people who live in Africa continent. If he whole world pay necessary attention to this topic, no one will die from agricultural peoplem, even not be hunger.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, i think, in conclusion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19393939394 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72241317896 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560606060606 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1678964129 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.823529412 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144886186486 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048217395245 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397599197601 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985700391199 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509978458732 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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